I think this looks like a really promising start. He looks like hes working hard and I think its really cool that youre doing this with him and hes going along with it very well. I'm excited to see more
I LOVE the last one. The way you caught him still, but yet the motion of the city is blurred around him is very intriguing.
I can't wait to see the rest of this, it could be a really interesting study of the insides and the people behind the business world during these economic times.
Like Alot! i want to more about what your intention is. what is/are the most important aspects that you want to portray? Once you narrow the key factors down - then you will be able to capture the thoughts. I agree with Maggie, the last one is "classic" love it! Your dad is a great sport and your ability to separate the dad and daughter from the story is cool. WANT TO SEE MORE!
Lis-a-Bith - Just looking at these again and thinking - how does this man (your dad) survive and stay connected and detached at the same time? How can you visually separate him from his environment, yet show how anchored he is in the culture? Can he and does he or the persona he represents have distinct roles on Wall Street separate from his "real" life, family ......
many possible questions to pose and ponder to solve this narrative. just a thought or 2.
day-um gurl these are sweet. I love the first and last ones, third one is almost there... I really like the composition. The second one is intriguing with the clenched fists, but there's not enough information there. Just not a complete thought yet. Can't wait to see more of these!
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I think this looks like a really promising start. He looks like hes working hard and I think its really cool that youre doing this with him and hes going along with it very well. I'm excited to see more
I LOVE the last one. The way you caught him still, but yet the motion of the city is blurred around him is very intriguing.
I can't wait to see the rest of this, it could be a really interesting study of the insides and the people behind the business world during these economic times.
Like Alot!
i want to more about what your intention is.
what is/are the most important aspects that you want to portray?
Once you narrow the key factors down - then you will be able to capture the thoughts. I agree with Maggie, the last one is "classic" love it!
Your dad is a great sport and your ability to separate the dad and daughter from the story is cool.
WANT TO SEE MORE!
Lis-a-Bith -
Just looking at these again and thinking - how does this man (your dad) survive and stay connected and detached at the same time?
How can you visually separate him from his environment, yet show how anchored he is in the culture? Can he and does he or the persona he represents have distinct roles on Wall Street separate from his "real" life, family ......
many possible questions to pose and ponder to solve this narrative.
just a thought or 2.
day-um gurl these are sweet. I love the first and last ones, third one is almost there... I really like the composition.
The second one is intriguing with the clenched fists, but there's not enough information there. Just not a complete thought yet.
Can't wait to see more of these!
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